It was a dark sad day, what else could Jessica do? Her parents were on holiday her friends were moving house, she sighed and picked up her guitar. "This is for you athena". She sighed and played her best friends favourite song: cry me a river. She hummed the song, it seemed odd, no one to judge her talents,
nobody to see her greatness. She stopped, " Huh, it.." it was completely out of time, that's what she was going to say but at that moment terry burst through the door "TERRY, where were you," she said through tears.
Well done Rose, a good narrative has been produced here. Did you mean it was completely out of tune, rather than time? :-)
It was the perfect time of year to perform the summer concert.
The sun was shining in the sky, and everyone was gathering in the school grounds to enjoy the annual outdoor concert.
There was to be lots of different types of music played including rock and classical.
Billy sat down and played his favourite song. He thought everyone would like it, but they didn’t.
He got up once he had finished and everyone moaned about how bad it was.
But then, it all came flooding back to him that he picked up the wrong note book so it was completely out of tune.
He sat down and just S I G H E D.
Well written Sam! It reads as one clear narrative nicely. It is up on 100WC.net!
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