It’s time for a few words to put into your writing! all five must be included but you can put them in any order. Maybe you would like to CAPITALISE them so that your readers can see them easily. They are:
Wide, Orange, Crocodile, Within, Collapsed
The challenge will close at midnight on 3rd December
Mr Tomkins' Entry:
The hour was late. The light was dark. It felt like the world had COLLAPSED on me.
WITHIN myself I felt extremely nervous.
I was only millimetres away from the edge.
Looking in to the vastness of the dark black sky I caught sight of an ORANGE glimmer, it wasn’t a star, nor a plane…an unrecognisable shimmer had hit the sky.
I lay down, exhausted.
I felt something CROCODILE-like: a WIDE and slithering creature creeping near my feet; the only sound I could hear was its heartbeat thumping like a loud bass drum.
A few pictures from the Basketball on Saturday evening...
Things to think about:
Mr. Tomkins Entry:
I was meandering slowly through a tropical jungle when I overheard something in the distance; I couldn’t fathom whether they were screams of people or screeches of birds. Perhaps rather naively, I ventured towards the sound.
As I crept through the jungle…crack, crack, crack. I had trodden upon what felt like 3 small egg shells. They were broken pieces of rock, but they had bled. Blood of the rainbow: vibrant reds, blues and yellows suddenly covered the floor. And as I looked up I could see objects in their thousands, if not millions…a sea of them.
Does this help you understand relative clauses? - Can you write a sentence which uses a relative clause?
Well done on getting in to the spirit of things today; hopefully a lot of money is raised for charity.
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