Sarah walked along the path at the end of the high street. The sky was black and the neon signs from all the shops shone out, flickering with colour into the night…
One of the signs read “It’s an egg overload! Scrambled, poached, fried – all you can eat for five dollars”.
And another read “Come and get your hair washed, cut and dried – all for fifteen dollars”.
Sarah thought, well I am hungry – and my fringe needs a cut, I’ll follow the signs to lead me there. She walked in – suddenly a scissor dropped out of the air and hit her!
Well written Sam - good use of the dash and I like the 'flickering with colour' description! It is on 100WC!
Breakfast bar hairdressers
Come visit our hairdressers with a fabulous feature The Breakfast Bar. Why not come and have your hair washed and cut and then enjoy our award winning breakfast including :
A variety of eggs;
Some sizzling bacon;
And hash browns.
All for free when you spend £40 or over on your hair.
Don’t worry if you’re pushed for time get a quick fringe cut and grab a breakfast bap.
If February’s dull days have got you feeling down come and have your hair colour changed to brighten up your days. Why not try a flickering - hot - red or neon - pink, you choose! We have every colour of the rainbow.
Come join us now and have a great start to your morning!
Well written Esme - I would quite like a free breakfast after my haircut! Very imaginative!
Weird adverts are a very normal thing now...Here’s one I saw recently
Are you tired of plain old eggs that anyone can get? Well we are too so we made BLACK EGGS! They’re exquisite new colour makes you start flickering with pure excitement!They’re also washed the unicorn tears (the very best thing to wash eggs in) It can’t get any better ? Welll it can! You’ll never get eggy gack stuck in your fringe because of our lastest technology. And guess what! They only cost £999:87 each! Go buy them now.
I don’t think I can afford these “black eggs”...
Great piece of writing, although I'm not sure if I fancy black eggs!
Ella was walking to her Aunts for lunch.Wind kept on blowing in her face, knocking her fringe into her eyes.
When she arrived at her Aunts her nose picked up the smell of cooked eggs.
"want some lunch?" Asked her Aunt.
So Ella washed her hands and sat down.Suddenly the lights flickered.One second it was light and the next it was black!What was happening?
When it finally stopped,Ella turned on the T.V.
A persuasive advert came on.
"Come and buy our BRILLIANT curtains! They heat up or cool down the room when you want! And they are SUPER COOL curtains designed for YOU!" Ella rushed to the shop and brought them straight away.
Well done Lola - I like the way you have been adventurous with your sentence structure.
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