Sleep wouldn’t take me into its gentle grasp but the usual party of birds had not awoken from their slumber, this meant that it was early. I wasn’t certain about the time, because the clock was at a standstill, but I guessed it was 3-4 AM. After whole minutes of thought I decided to get up. Avoiding the creaky floorboards and that one squeaky toy that’s been on the floor for weeks, I cautiously entered the landing. Creeping down the stairs, trying not to create any noise, I noticed that there were statics on the T.V then it changed into something horrifying; we seemed to be on television..
What a wonderfully descriptive piece Aoife. I really like your use of vocabulary and punctuation. :-) It's up on 100WC.net
One night, me and my friends were out when – suddenly – we were lost. It was pitch black in town and we couldn’t see a thing.
So we decided to sit down and then we feel asleep.
We awoke the next morning on the side of the road. Crash! A window smashed, and out jumped a man holding a pistol. He fired around twenty five shots at us.
We ran into the forest and I tripped over…
I opened my eyes and I was in hospital, with a massive stick in my leg! I looked around, my friends were there too. Cameras surrounded us, we seemed to be on the television…
A great read Sam. Seems like you are part of a TV Drama show! Well written; it's up on 100wc.net.
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