Me and my dad love to go bike riding in the forest. But one day, that all changed…
It was a Saturday night and me and my dad were in the forest, riding our bikes. We were having a great time! Chatting away, we talked about what I did at school when – suddenly I flew to the ground. My hand was grabbed by dad. “Are you alright?” he asked.
“I’m OK,” I replied. But my bike was stuck in a massive tree. “I could have died!” I said.
“You saved my life, dad!” I thanked him.
“Come on now, we better get home.”
I’ll never ride my bike again.
Well done Sam. Don't forget when 'Dad' is being used as a name, it needs to be capitalised. It's up on 100WC.net.
OK. I'll try hard to remember that. Thank you.
Beep. Beep. All I heard was the voice of her monitor. She lay their legs unable to walk, brain unworking.
Beep. I remember her push along bike with pink and blue handles. How she rode on that bike once she got pedals and no stabilisers. Her dream was as high as a Redwood and everyday she would climb one branch towards her goal.
Beep. My daughter a cyclist who was never afraid of a challenge. In a coma, heart rate dropping life sleeping through her lips.
Beep. Beep. Beep. My jem will survive.
I can see how this image inspired the piece of writing; it is very dramatic. It is up on 100WC.net now.
Me and my bike
I really want to be like the rest of my family and be able to ride my bike, but I just can’t seem to do it. Despite the fact I practice every day for at least an hour. I’m beginning to think somebody has cursed the bike; or me; or both.
The worst part is year 2 our doing a bike course in the woods – where you take your bike in and ride around a track. Everyone in my class laughed at me, first of all my bike is all battered and antique. Secondly, I couldn’t even ride my bike.
It was the final day of the bike course and the teachers wanted me to join in. so I got on my bike shaking like mad. Then I pushed off, put my feet on the peddles and I was off. It felt great!
Nice work Esme. I like the adventure of using a semi colon but I think an ellipsis would work better and build the tension for the reader. It's up now!
Nice stories everyone
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