Today I have had a very unlucky day.
It all started on my way to work...
I was walking along the pavement in a rush because i was late for work, when i came across a ladder. Everyone knows not to walk under a ladder but had to get to work so there was no choice. SPLAT!!!!!! A tin of red paint fell on top of me and I was covered head to toe in paint but I had to carry on because I was late for work.
I was still walking along the pavement when my feet felt a bit sticky, I loooked down and noticed I was walking in cement and now I was stuck to it. I felt like I was sinking in quick sand. (When I got out) I had to carry on because I was late for work.
I carried on walking but then I realised their was a purse on the floor so went and handed it in to the police in rush because I was late for for work.
Guess what! the police said I could keep the purse because there were no takers but I had to get going because I was late for work.
While I was there I asked “where is PREZZO (where I work)”. “PREZZO isn’t open today it’s not open on sundays” they replied confused. Sunday. I don’t work on sundays I must of got the wrong day. “Right I better get going”. So I did but with my few extra coins I got a taxi.
Well done Esme but remember the word count! Try to pick your words really carefully.
Dan’s heart starting sinking. The red burning fire raced towards him.
He grabbed the last few coins from his bedroom and ran outside and opened his garage and walked in. Suddenly an idea sparked into his mind, so he picked up the ladder and climbed onto the roof.
On top he had these bright blue warning lights which he had never used before. He switched them on – the lights started flashing onto the pavement.
Dan turned the lights so that they were facing the house, and then he turned on the alarm and waited for the wail of the sirens…
Well done Sam - you have written this well and it is up on 100WC.net
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