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This week we have part of a strange sentence. It is:
…empty. What a surprise!… Things to think about:
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Lily and Sky
12/3/2019 11:29:24 am
It was Christmas Eve and everyone was tucked into their beds waiting for morning to come. Everyone but one boy; his name Tom. He didn't believe in Santa or happiness on Christmas. For many years he had been disappointed by his present. Every year he would get an orange or something that a child would hate. He woke up and went downstairs. He saw a present that said To Tom from Santa .He opened it was...Empty. What a surprise! What a disappointment.
MatthewF and Finlay
12/3/2019 11:30:39 am
It was the match day , Barcelona vs Real Madrid. Messi scored almost immediately. About 30 minutes later it was the end of the match. The score was 3-3. As Messi went to the dressing room it was...empty. What a surprise!
tianna,hattie,zoe
12/3/2019 11:33:14 am
''HELP'' screamed Samantha.''Where are you?'' shouted Charlie.'
William and Byran
12/3/2019 11:33:47 am
once long a go, there lived a punishing pirate who went by the name of black brock. One day he was digging on the bright yellow beach sand and he got a glimpse of a brown box starring at him."A treasure chest!"He shouted in excitment. Opening the chest slowly revealing nothing."It's empty!...What a surprise!...
Rhys and lola
12/3/2019 11:33:52 am
I looked into the bucket and it was empty. what a surprise! The boy Timothy Jackson just put it down the well he tried again but there was still nothing in the bucket. He went home and told his mother then he realised his was getting grousers from the grocery store. OR WAS SHE...
Izzy, Hayden and Edward
12/3/2019 11:34:01 am
She tip-toed inside the mystical house it was empty .What a surprise ! she silently ran closer closer to the edge of the house. she strutted up stairs to the room that had noises coming out she put her hand on the handle to pull it but she couldn't open it was like someone was inside... she ran down out of the door but couldn't get out mystery house it was like someone was holding the door shut ...
Oakley & Owen
12/3/2019 11:34:37 am
One day, there lived a pirate called Joey he wanted to find some crew mates. So he decided to go on a adventure to find some. On his journey there was a sea monster. He had to battle the monster with only a dagger and a revolver.He had defeated the monster.But then he saw a sinking ship. He went investigate. But all he could find was wood. He thought to him self, "empty. What a surprise!"
Joshua and Edward
12/3/2019 11:34:44 am
Once upon a time Josh and Ed went shopping to Morrisons. They wanted to buy:
freddie and dan
12/3/2019 11:34:53 am
100 word challenge
Sam
15/3/2019 08:30:54 am
100 WORD CHALLENGE… BY SAM
Mr. Tomkins
15/3/2019 10:06:44 am
Well done Sam - the start reminds me a little bit of a book that Aoife recommended to me called 'A Place Called Perfect', which you might enjoy! You writing is up on 100WC - well done! Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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