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Visit to Bath - Sam

17/10/2018

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Today I went to Bath. I was walking in the street and a random guy danced clumsily into me.

Then the next thing I knew - he had fallen over an orange! He started to punch it like a fighter. I think he was mad. He started to scream, “ arrrr arrrr arrr arrr arrr arrr arrr arrrr arrrrrrrrrrr!" He ran down the street till I could not see him anymore.

I turned around. He was there for a second. Then he vanished. It was a bit creepy and a bit funny.

But I just laughed my head off.
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Susan J
24/10/2018 07:17:18 pm

A clear story and a good way to use these five words.
I found the combination of humour and the strangeness of the situation really interesting.The second to last line had impact. Try not to round of your story too much though - perhaps your final sentence could be more of a cliffhanger? Well done.

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