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This Is War - Oscar

6/3/2018

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This is war, Sam and Libby have entered the arena, ''Make sure there is no physical contact.'' said the man in charge.

''NO! It makes it so boring!'' They said together.

In my head I was thinking what I would do if I was in charge...

First, I would allow there to be contact, but not on purpose because they might trip into each other by accident! Secondly, when they had their first round Libby was on top with twelve eliminations and Sam had nine. Then they went back in for the second round, when they came back out; Sam won! She got fifteen eliminations and Libby got eight.
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Mrs. G. link
9/3/2018 04:18:52 pm

Oscar,
I like how you are using dialog to move your story along. I am wondering what kind of competition is going on in your piece.
Keep writing.
Mrs. G. Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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