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I wonder what stories these boats have to tell? They may be abandoned, rusting and forgotten forever, but they look like they have enjoyed a long, happy life in days gone by.
The boats must have spent so many days lazing in the enchanted ocean and basking in the heat of the sizzling, summer sunshine, underneath aqua skies. Daily, the boats would have crashed between the cascading, pure and flowing waves of the cool sea, amongst the aquatic life. Now, the paint on the boats is beginning to fade, but a life that once was is etched in every single bit of paint that fades away and hazy memories will always stay.
11 Comments
Danny
15/2/2017 12:16:18 pm
Hi Connor, thank you for your comment on my story. I am really happy that you have enjoyed it. Are you enjoying the 100 wc too?.
kayla
13/2/2017 02:10:31 am
I like how you started with iwonder
Danny
15/2/2017 12:19:17 pm
Hi Kayla, thank you for your comment on my story, I am happy you liked the beginning and I hope it made you want to read the rest of the story. How are you enjoying the 100wc?
kayla
13/2/2017 02:21:21 am
I like how you used interesting words to create a descriptive sentence So interesting! Heres two examples:
Danny
15/2/2017 12:21:17 pm
Thank you for commenting on my story. I am happy that you liked the descriptive words. Good luck with the rest of your writing.
Danny
15/2/2017 12:25:58 pm
Hi Suzanna, thank you for your comment on my story. To me the boats looked liked they had been abandoned and old, so I grew that idea that and thought about the life that they had and that is how my story began. Are you enjoying the 100 wc?
Mrs McCalmont
13/2/2017 01:43:46 pm
Great writing! I really enjoyed your use of language. Every picture does tell a story but sometimes we don't look carefully to see the possibilities.
Danny
15/2/2017 12:29:09 pm
Hello, thank you for commenting on my boat story. It is great to know that your class have enjoyed reading it. I hope that your class are enjoying the 100 WC. Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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